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Post by Majimaune on Aug 25, 2006 20:14:23 GMT -5
I didnt mean for mine to rhyme so it doesnt have to.
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Post by Angoreth on Aug 27, 2006 0:07:38 GMT -5
Hm atleast ya'll here know it. I used to get poems deleted because they were not put just right  |
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Post by erinion on Aug 27, 2006 2:34:38 GMT -5
Ok ok I have something for you. Shining through the silent breeze As it wafts through the trees. Outside someone's standing, Some one please continue with this I cant. Inside no-one's sleeping. There we go, and if no-one else is willing to continue it, let us begin a new poem! |
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Post by Majimaune on Aug 27, 2006 3:06:09 GMT -5
Ok I'm good with that. Angoreth why don't you start I like your stuff.
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Post by Angoreth on Aug 28, 2006 17:43:51 GMT -5
Oklie Doklie  Love is my one wish to be held tight by my hands, no one can take away from me what my heart demands. |
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Post by erinion on Aug 29, 2006 16:56:14 GMT -5
Well the moon poem goes like:
The moon is the home of romance,
where angels go for holidays.
Shining its light on loving couples,
Staring at them from its corner.
Ever bursting with light soft light,
the suns only adversary.
A very small delight watching,
fighting for position in the sky.
The moon will glare and stare
And when you think you've hidden she will run away,
Only to sneak up on you again,
So don't run, just sleep the night away.
none can compare
So fair illuminating the sky,
playing hide and seek
shadows casted far and wide.
Shining through the silent breeze
As it wafts through the trees.
Outside someone's standing,
Inside no-one's sleeping.
Very good guys, and that is finished!
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Post by Angoreth on Aug 29, 2006 17:45:29 GMT -5
I think it came out very well Indeed ;D
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Post by Majimaune on Aug 30, 2006 5:14:00 GMT -5
Yes I would have to agree. Lets continue on yours now Angoreth.
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Post by erinion on Sept 1, 2006 4:38:15 GMT -5
Love is my one wish to be held tight by my hands, no one can taken away from me what my heart demands. That's good...let's see here... Playing tricks with my mind Confusing my thoughts and sight. I wish I could escape this torment But love is my light. |
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Post by Angoreth on Sept 1, 2006 14:17:05 GMT -5
I can't choose which i want to use :\
My light yes it is my light
to chase away shadows,
I could never do without
it would leave me hollow.
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Lonleyness, torchurous you huant me
like a nightmare seeping in,
my light my only exit que
is love from with which to give.
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Post by Majimaune on Sept 1, 2006 18:52:12 GMT -5
I don't know either, their both good.
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Post by erinion on Sept 2, 2006 3:05:34 GMT -5
Why not both? They still work.
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Post by erinion on Sept 3, 2006 6:15:07 GMT -5
Angoreth, after this stanza you can add or you can choose to finish it. Majimaune too. Now how...
The light of your life
Lights up my life.
Love is my beacon
To return to our strife.
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Post by Majimaune on Sept 4, 2006 1:45:20 GMT -5
Angoreth I have nothing. Go ahead and finish it or add.
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Post by Angoreth on Sept 4, 2006 2:54:09 GMT -5
OKlies, I'll choose to end, since poems including love and light can only continue on so long ;D
I will try to grasp it
and hold it like before,
I will try and hide it
in the deepest of my core.
No hiding will not do
its what I've always done,
I guess I'll have to share it
and try hard not to run.
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