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Post by erinion on Aug 14, 2006 22:49:06 GMT -5
THIS IS FOR YOUR OWN WORKS ONLY! PLAGIARISM IS A CRIME! DO NOT PUT OTHER PEOPLE'S WORKS HERE WITHOUT THEIR PERMISSION!
Well, some of us think we are good at poetry, others not so sure. Here, you can post your own poems, or write one as a group, which I was hoping people are willing to do. Topic: Moonlight. Write a line, stanza, whatever you wish, but not an individual poem. If it is an individual, signal. There is no set style for this poem either.
To get started:
The moon is the home of romance, where angels go for holidays. Shining its light on loving couples, Staring at them from its corner.
PS: You can give CONSTRUCTIVE criticism.
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Post by Majimaune on Aug 15, 2006 1:48:11 GMT -5
Oi erinion your good at lymrics arnt you. Put one of those up.
At a later date I will put up something that I have writen.
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Post by Angoreth on Aug 15, 2006 4:38:40 GMT -5
To get started: The moon is the home of romance, where angels go for holidays. Shining its light on loving couples, Staring at them from its corner. Ever bursting with light soft light, the suns only adversary. A very small delight watching, fighting for position in the sky. Hope thats ok....
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Post by TheBlackWizard on Aug 15, 2006 7:17:10 GMT -5
Very nice poem, Angoreth. Erinion's, you'rs rhymes less, but the theme is better.
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Post by Angoreth on Aug 15, 2006 10:12:41 GMT -5
Is this thread just for the continuing of the all together poem? Or do we post our own works in this one thread? Or do we make a new one?
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Post by Majimaune on Aug 16, 2006 4:56:13 GMT -5
That would be pretty cool just continuing one poem.
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Post by erinion on Aug 22, 2006 4:04:53 GMT -5
You're free to post any poem, but for now, can we have just the moon poem? When we're finished with it, start a new one. I just changed the title of the thread to Moon Poem, but I might change it to group poetry. Angoreth, if you want your poem moved, just say the word
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Post by Angoreth on Aug 22, 2006 4:32:08 GMT -5
lol If you know where to put it be my guest, cause I have nooo clue.
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Post by erinion on Aug 22, 2006 17:13:38 GMT -5
I meant if you wanted to create a new thread for individual poems, I'd move it then. Ah well, I guess I'll do it myself.
Sorry, it appears I can't move single posts. For now, it can stay here. Anyway, back on topic:
The moon will glare and stare And when you think you've hidden she will run away, Only to sneak up on you again, So don't run, just sleep the night away.
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Post by Angoreth on Aug 23, 2006 0:45:32 GMT -5
Ah sorry didnt catch that part none can compare So fair illuminating the sky, playing hide and seek shadows casted far and wide.
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Post by Majimaune on Aug 23, 2006 1:25:13 GMT -5
Jees you guys are deep. I dont think I can add on sorry (I'm not deep enough). Muahahaha.
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Post by Angoreth on Aug 23, 2006 17:11:13 GMT -5
I don't know actually if they all have to be deep? I mean, I think a change in depth would be nice and might open way to a mix of all assortments ;D
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Post by Majimaune on Aug 24, 2006 3:20:34 GMT -5
Ok ok I have something for you.
Shining through the silent breeze As it wafts through the trees. Outside someone's standing,
Some one please continue with this I cant.
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Post by erinion on Aug 25, 2006 4:20:24 GMT -5
Something that rhymes with ing...I'll leave it to you or somone else...if you're ever stuck for a line, try rhymezone ( www.rhymezone.com)
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Post by Angoreth on Aug 25, 2006 5:34:37 GMT -5
lol? If that isnt lazy I dont know what is lol Just teasin
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