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Post by fanficfan on Nov 1, 2006 2:12:17 GMT -5
Maj - You've been saying you're gonna put something up for a while now. I'll believe it when I see it... Angoreth - Very nice piece, I especially like You seem to have a knack for writing good poetry that I lack, keep up the good work, I look forward to reading more of your stuff.
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Post by Majimaune on Nov 2, 2006 1:28:14 GMT -5
Hey sorry I havent had time to write it up on the computer. I will do it ok.
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Post by Majimaune on Nov 3, 2006 2:07:51 GMT -5
Ok they are. First ones watching the sunset at Uluru. Second is on Great Kepple Island.
The dryness of the desert Creeping in from all around With a great big rock Changing colours in the sun.
People everywhere, Yet quiteness presserves With colours of the sky behind And colours of the Earth infront.
The second one:
The solitude of the beach Watching the sun go down Water all around.
With the growing dark All the stars come out And the ocean calms right down.
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Post by Majimaune on Nov 3, 2006 2:12:35 GMT -5
I forgot to put this one in. I wrote it last night while listening to the rain on the roof.
I don't know how I can do this Although I must try. If only you could see What I see in you.
Your laugh is infectious If you laugh so do I. I seem to be fighting a losing battle, Just to get to know you.
While I listened to the rain, I thought of your eyes, So bright, The brightest things imaginable.
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Post by erinion on Nov 3, 2006 5:30:34 GMT -5
Very interesting...strange...one would almost think there is someone out there who has captured your attention, and knowing you as I do, it is..."complicated"
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Post by Majimaune on Nov 4, 2006 0:07:56 GMT -5
Ah yeah your right there Erinion. Mitch probably gets the last one there, seeing as he knows the person.
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Post by Majimaune on Nov 7, 2006 0:59:23 GMT -5
I feel like writing a poem right now but only have a very small thing giving me inspiration and I cant put that into words.
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Post by Angoreth on Nov 10, 2006 20:15:12 GMT -5
Thank you FFF And Very nice poems Maj, I'm glad your posting more poetry
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Post by Majimaune on Nov 11, 2006 2:54:03 GMT -5
Yeah so am I to tell you the truth. It's something that I can let all my emotions out with. I find it very good.
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Post by Angoreth on Nov 14, 2006 8:22:09 GMT -5
Yeah, I know what you mean My life has changed so much but memories seem distant, Why do I feel as such There was no resistance. I feel much older now I am no longer a child, How came this heart That would no longer smile. I will smile But behind me lays, Memories Of far off days… I can't forget the tragic I can't remember the love, Is it magic Or is it from above. Take my heart and my life Its all yours nothing less, Within eternal strife If not rid of could destroy the rest. What do I say How do I act, Do I forget those days That happened for a fact. The memories burn The words scold, Everything's turned An empty shell to behold. Is that the last Those feelings fade forever, Or is it just the past And I'll soon be put together.
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Post by Majimaune on Nov 15, 2006 3:54:34 GMT -5
Hey thats really good. Wish I could write stuff that good.
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Post by erinion on Dec 4, 2006 5:47:45 GMT -5
Something off the top of my head:
Longing the touch, yet lacking the desire. You're hidden from me So arise and set my heart on fire.
Feeling lonely While surrounded by friends. There is no love for me And my torture will hopefully one day end.
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shadowcat
Gondorian Soldier
When light and darkness meet.
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Post by shadowcat on Dec 4, 2006 23:38:13 GMT -5
My head is full of dancing poems, Though no exit will they make. Storys spin behind my eyes, But only shadowed forms they take. Teasing. Dodging. Out of reach...
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Post by Majimaune on Dec 5, 2006 1:09:06 GMT -5
I have too many emotions going on inside me at the minute to express them well.
BTW good poems you two.
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Post by Angoreth on Dec 8, 2006 22:56:59 GMT -5
Very nice Erinion and Shadow
I was in an odd mood, I don't actually remember what lol
Once I was a sailor and BlackHeart was my name, I sailed in silver ships upon the diamond waves.
I stole the golden heart of a sweet young miss, and sailed away for many years and built my treasure since.
When I came back to land she ran to me and held me tight, and told me if I sailed again she'd break my arms out of spite.
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