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Post by Majimaune on Dec 10, 2006 0:58:47 GMT -5
Its different to all the other poems in here. It seems as if it is just a poem not an outlet for emotion.
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Post by Majimaune on Dec 11, 2006 1:36:09 GMT -5
I have a poem for you all. Well actually I have two but only one will I be sharing with you.
Please stop this.
Get out of my head.
I can't do one simple thing
Without thinking about you.
I know you don't want anything
But I do.
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Post by Angoreth on Dec 11, 2006 3:49:56 GMT -5
Yeah I know, thats kind of the point Erinion. It's a goofy poem I was in a goofy mood. The poem doesn't always have to reflect an exact feeling in exact wording does it? I'll delete it if so, sorry  |
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Post by shadowcat on Dec 11, 2006 11:33:33 GMT -5
nonono! Delete it, Ang? Never! It's just fine for it to be here. Whatever anyone else might say... *holds up a shield* Goofy is good. LONG LIVE GOOFY POEMS! *holds up sword in other hand* =^.^= hehehe Besides, I like it and think it'd be good to have something other then just emotional dumpage here. Am I right?  Just leave it where it is hun. |
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Post by Majimaune on Dec 12, 2006 1:37:29 GMT -5
Hey this is where I dump ALL my emotion (or most of it anyway). I quite like it when other people dont do emotion though. And Angoreth I'm not letting you delete it and that is my word as a GM
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Post by Angoreth on Dec 12, 2006 9:53:44 GMT -5
Alrighty *selutes* ^_^ |
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Post by Majimaune on Dec 13, 2006 2:33:20 GMT -5
Thats what I like to see.
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Post by Angoreth on Dec 21, 2006 2:53:22 GMT -5
Just let it spill....
Burn the flame that lead me here. Keep it going lead me to where you are, who ever you might be, I need not go blindly.
I'm wanting to hold you close and tight, feel your arms around me, bring forth youself into light and kill the dreams that haunt me.
Fastly grasp onto you never letting go, please come soon, I need to know I have one I need to know, I can have someone of my very own.
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Post by Majimaune on Dec 22, 2006 21:10:20 GMT -5
Hey thats really good.
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Post by Angoreth on Jan 9, 2007 1:22:37 GMT -5
Why thank you, I was feeling something rather strongly at the moment, though I don't rightly remember what lol -.-
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shadowcat
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Post by shadowcat on Jan 9, 2007 16:36:42 GMT -5
You sang of a strong heart aching
You walked along a lonely road
You caught my ear
And then my eyes
I let them linger
And found enchantment
Woven by your words
Woven through you fingers
I tried to be as stone
Cool, even cold and hard
Your whispers found the cracks
Found a way through my mask
I tried to be a bird
Fleeting and lighthearted
But you spoke of truths
Drawing my feet back to earth
I tried to hide in shadow
There you were already
Warming and yet chilling
Holding out your hand
I acted like a fool
But you knew that game
I faced you and began to find myself
You faced me and I couldn't see you
Need asked to remove the mask
I step back
My hand opened
I can not now run
Nor can I stay still
What now?
I sing of a strong heart aching
But I've left the lonely road
I caught your eye
And then your heart
You tried to see closer
And found enchantment
Woven through my words
Woven from my very soul
You tried pull me near
Dark, hurt and longing
I reached out a healer's hand
And touched more then I had planed
You tried to show me you're real
Hurt and seeking hope
But I saw something deeper
And wondered at the scar
You came to me in shadow
There you heard my name
Trusting and yet careful
Hoping to reach you
You closed you eyes
But I kept on praying
You challenged me like none before
The light in me wavered and grew
Need brought me to challenge you
You stepped back
Your hand opened
You couldn't turn
Nor would you change
What now?
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Post by erinion on Jan 14, 2007 5:37:49 GMT -5
Quite long, but also good, and Angoreth, don't delete. Chances are I wasn't thinking straight. Well I would post a poem except
a) I lack the energy
b) They aren't ready yet
c) I will soon anyway.
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Post by Majimaune on Jan 25, 2007 0:42:34 GMT -5
Thats good Angoreth I like it although it didnt quite go with the music I am listening to at the moment which is S.O.A.D.
I am halfway through writing a song and so I might post the lyrics for it up here one day.
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Post by erinion on Jan 26, 2007 4:22:07 GMT -5
Don't even get me started on song writing...I have written 40 in the last five weeks. None will be posted, however.
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Just leave it where it is hun.