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Post by erinion on Aug 22, 2006 17:15:00 GMT -5
This for your stand alone poems, and you can discuss your own work, work of others and write any poems you wish.
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Post by Majimaune on Aug 23, 2006 1:26:52 GMT -5
Yes so this is for you Angoreth.
Muahahaha.
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Post by erinion on Aug 25, 2006 4:25:09 GMT -5
If it's possible to move a single post, let's do it, otherwise we will just let it stay where it is.
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Post by Angoreth on Aug 25, 2006 5:39:07 GMT -5
I just copied from the group poetry then deleted and pasted here, that alright?
Darkness ever nearer to my heart it clouds the light, fading in and out of memory my fears and doubts take flight.
How I’ve come to be here I don’t know where to begin, why you left me all alone drowning in your sin.
shattered there it lay my heart upon the floor, transcending time and space till my being collapses in.
Magnificent, your brilliant you've made me sad and bitter to, wonderful, ever clever leaving me yearning for you.
Fool me once shame on you fool me twice shame on me, three times a charm and here you come to break me completely.
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Post by Majimaune on Aug 25, 2006 20:11:58 GMT -5
Nice I like it.
I will post something of mine soon I promise.
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Post by Angoreth on Aug 27, 2006 0:05:21 GMT -5
Thankx ;D Sad feelings but I like the way it came out I love reading other people's poems so that'd be awesome
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Post by Angoreth on Aug 29, 2006 17:52:20 GMT -5
Some humor ^.^
Oh my darling my sweet my fair, how I love thee none can compare!
To your awesomeness your prestige, your magnificence brings them to their knee's.
Your precious corners all covered in cheese, the whole in the middle only you can appease.
Oh so wonderful how I can sit, and eat you for hours my delicious cheese it's.
Gotta love em' ;D
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Post by Majimaune on Aug 31, 2006 3:00:05 GMT -5
Ok I have something here for you. Their some haiku's that I wrote for English.
The sound of laughter Breaks the clouds Of winter darkness. _________________
Purple flowers Defy the shadow And turn to the sun. ____________________
Smoke on the wind Mingles with the shadow Of artificial spirit.
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Post by TheBlackWizard on Aug 31, 2006 14:43:23 GMT -5
I prefer the third one Majimaune.
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Post by Angoreth on Aug 31, 2006 18:27:58 GMT -5
I like em all But I do also prefer the third one. Idk I like morbid things
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Post by erinion on Sept 1, 2006 4:32:08 GMT -5
Hmm...just a rambling of mine here...
Inside, you're creeping Torment. Outside, you control Dominate. Wrap me up and take me away. Steal. When will you realise Notice.
Something takes over And you don't know what. I know, and the answer is simple Open your eyes, answer the truth It's you. Not me or anyone else. Just you.
Hmm...I guess with more time and effort it could be better.
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Post by Majimaune on Sept 1, 2006 5:23:11 GMT -5
Why thanks guys. I too like the third one best.
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Post by Angoreth on Sept 1, 2006 14:07:41 GMT -5
Why would it need to be better Erinion? I thought it sounded awesome Most welcome, I love seeing other peoples poetry. Very inspiring to see different forms
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Post by Majimaune on Sept 1, 2006 18:58:11 GMT -5
Yeah. I like to see others art work as well but you know we can't do that here.
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Post by erinion on Sept 3, 2006 3:00:05 GMT -5
Let's see now...what can I conjure up...
Run away from me, Run to your haven. It's gonna be shaken, You'll be cravin' For my shelter.
Ever since you left There's been a hole Tearing up my heart My life and soul Was taken from me.
Now is the time For the uprising It's my turn Ain't that surprising? You didn't see it coming.
What do you want, You know what I need. No more intoxication, I have been freed From your shackles.
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